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| ID | Project | Category | View Status | Date Submitted | Last Update |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 0015812 | Open Gaming Network | [All Projects] Page Content | public | 2020-02-27 20:27 | 2020-03-05 03:53 |
| Reporter | webform | Assigned To | jreyst | ||
| Priority | normal | Severity | minor | Reproducibility | have not tried |
| Status | resolved | Resolution | fixed | ||
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| Target Version | Fixed in Version | ||||
| Summary | 0015812: Comma needed for clarity. | ||||
| Description | Issue type: Page Content Reported from: [not specified] by Dan email: danhop93@gmail.com User Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 10.0; Win64; x64) AppleWebKit/537.36 (KHTML, like Gecko) Chrome/80.0.3987.122 Safari/537.36 On page: https://www.d20pfsrd.com/classes/base-classes/alchemist/discoveries/paizo-alchemist-discoveries/syringe-stirge-su Second half of the last sentence of the description needs a comma between "span" and "it". Currently reads as "if it has not attached to an enemy before the end of its life span it and its bomb payload fall inert." It took me a solid 2-3 minutes to figure out what the sentence meant. It would be much easier to read as: "if it has not attached to an enemy before the end of its life span, it and its bomb payload fall inert." | ||||
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